I came across this article in the NY Times regarding Obama’s new health care law and its journey through the Supreme Court rulings (http://www.nytimes.com/2012/04/03/us/politics/obama-says-hes-confident-health-care-law-will-stand.html?ref=policy).
Though the topic of the piece is very intriguing and newsy, I wouldn’t call it a well-organized story. In fact, I had a difficult time pinpointing which paragraph was the nut graph. Later in the story, adding to my confusion, a completely unrelated topic was brought up, military aid in Mexico, and then never concluded on or tied into the rest of the story.
After reading the story, what do you think? Is the nut graph difficult to identify? Was the story clearly outlined? Is the piece unorganized and off-topic at times?
Looking forward to your responses,